Rachel Wheeler's Self Deprecation
I absolutely loved her first sentence; it really peaked my interest. Rachel really captured what it's like to have an obsessive personality. It was cool how she interacted with the reader at different points in the story.
Francesca M's Self Deprecation (60 seconds...or not...)
I loved the structure of the piece. I thought the responses to the dentist were very amusing. I really liked the closing sentence.
Sean Eykel's Self Deprecation (The Most Harmless Thing)
The piece was very well written. I loved the goonies comparison. It was wicked funny but also a little sad. The piece was really great.
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